我分三部分寫:開頭、中間、結(jié)尾
首先是文章的開頭,作文開頭我認(rèn)為是最好寫的,只要把作文標(biāo)題寫上去就可以了,也最容易提高分值。 It goes without saying that the issue of piracy has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the college students have such experiences using piracy produce. In addition,the survey also shows that an increasing number of people are interested in piracy produce, and will join the army in the future. 這個(gè)是我依據(jù)六級(jí)作文“反盜版”寫的,比如今年的六級(jí)作文,只要替換成“西方節(jié)日”的關(guān)鍵詞就可以了。 比如“壓力”討論: It goes without saying that the issue of stress has caused wide public concern at present. According to a recent survey made by some experts, as many as 60%-80% of the people have felt under stress. In addition, the survey also shows that an increasing number of people will join the army in the future. 中間段落有的要求是分析原因,有的要求是正反觀點(diǎn) 對(duì)于分析原因,我總結(jié)了三個(gè)萬能原因:經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展、政策推動(dòng)、法律制定,以不變應(yīng)萬變 What caused this remarkable phenomenon? Personally, there are at least three premier factors contributing to it. To begin with, the government has been forwarding the policy to support private houses programs. Furthermore, the increased income resulting from economic growth plays a cardinal part in the changes. Finally, the authorities concerned have made proper regulations to protect private houses. 這個(gè)是我依據(jù)六級(jí)作文“私有房產(chǎn)”改寫的,這三個(gè)原因可以說在任何方面都是可以用的,再說了改卷的老師都是看你的句型和詞匯用的如何,根本就不會(huì)注意你寫的是什么內(nèi)容,這個(gè)大家都應(yīng)該是知道的。 比如今年的六級(jí)作文,你說“經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展了所以大家才有錢去過西方節(jié)日”難道不可以么?我就是這么寫的。 另一個(gè)是正反觀點(diǎn) When asked about their opinion of stress, people always response differently. The overwhelming majority of people deem that stress is not the bad thing it is often supposed to be. They are of the attitude that a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and to give purpose in life. On the contrary, there are other people who hold stress contributes to one's mental decline and hence endangers his health. In conformity to them, relaxation, the opposite of stress, is essential for a healthy mind and body. 這個(gè)我是依據(jù)朱泰祺老師的作文“壓力”改寫的,大家參考。 結(jié)尾有的要求是提出對(duì)策,有的要求是趨勢分析 提出對(duì)策,原因找出來了要提出解決方案,我這里總結(jié)了三個(gè)萬能措施:政府立法、提高意識(shí)、認(rèn)識(shí)價(jià)值 In conclusion, it is imperative for us to take effective measures to reverse the disturbing phenomenon. To begin with, we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. Furthermore, we should enhance the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us. Finally, we should bring home to people the value of protecting ocean resources. Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources. Also I believe that we humans can overcome this difficulty, and we will have a brighter future. 這一部分我是依據(jù)考研作文的那篇“魚”改寫的,大家可以參考。 大家想一想,有什么問題這三個(gè)措施不能解決的呢?還考慮什么,背吧! 結(jié)尾的另一個(gè)寫法是趨勢分析。 From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that the qualities of people's living have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction. 這個(gè)是我依據(jù)胡敏老師那篇“生活水平提高”改寫的,大家參考。 這個(gè)寫法同樣可以適用于今年的六級(jí)寫作,“以后過西方節(jié)日的人會(huì)越來越多,是一個(gè)趨勢”。 |
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