星期五 敘事類和應(yīng)用類作文結(jié)構(gòu)

一、敘事類作文結(jié)構(gòu)公式

四級(jí)寫作中涉及的敘事類作文一般是要求考生敘述一個(gè)事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過，如車禍、生病或一次難忘的經(jīng)歷，然后談?wù)勛约旱母惺芑虻玫降膯⑹尽?/p>

例（2003年9月）
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Tth Day Classmate Fell ill ( or Got Injured ) . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.簡單敘述一下這位貯存器學(xué)生?。ɑ蚴軅┑那闆r。
2.同學(xué)、老師和你是如何幫助他/她的。
3.人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛你的感受是……

1.常見結(jié)構(gòu)公式陳列

第一段 交代事件背景
(1)引出事件。
(2)進(jìn)一步描述背景情況或概述事件的特點(diǎn)。
(3)由背景引出具體事件或說明事件的重要性。

第一段 交代事件背景
(1)主題句：總述事件發(fā)生的背景。
(2)擴(kuò)展句一：進(jìn)一步描述背景情況或概述事件的特點(diǎn)。
(3)擴(kuò)展句二：由背景引出具體事件或說明事件的重要性。

第二段 敘述事件經(jīng)過
(4)Now I still remember clearly 引出事件。/ There is one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now .
(5)事件發(fā)生的時(shí)間和當(dāng)時(shí)的情形。
(6)接下來的情況。
(7)進(jìn)一步的發(fā)展。
(8)As a result / However , 事件結(jié)果。

第二段 敘述事件經(jīng)過
(4)主題句：概括引出要講述的事件。
(5)擴(kuò)展句一：交代情件發(fā)生的時(shí)間和當(dāng)時(shí)的情況。
(6)擴(kuò)展句二：描述接下來的情況。
(7)擴(kuò)展句三：描述事件的結(jié)果或影響。
(8)結(jié)尾句：說明事件的結(jié)果或影響。

第三段 談?wù)剛€(gè)人感受
(9)Every time I recall 該事件，“我”的感受或得到的啟示。/該事件left me in deep thought / gave me a significant lesson .
(10)第一點(diǎn)感受。
(11)第二點(diǎn)感受。

第三段 談?wù)剛€(gè)人感受
(9)“我”由這件事而引發(fā)的感受或得到的啟示。
(10)擴(kuò)展句一：“我”的第一點(diǎn)感受。
(11)擴(kuò)展句二：“我”的第二點(diǎn)感受。

2.結(jié)構(gòu)公式真題演示

例（2005年6月）
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay in honor of teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese :
1.向老師致以節(jié)日祝賀。
2.從一件難忘的事回憶老師的教誨和無私的奉獻(xiàn)。
3.我如何報(bào)答老師的關(guān)愛……

參考范文
Honor for My Teacher

(1) The once per year's Teacher's Day will come soon . (2) On this special occasion , all of us students should express our respect and love to our teachers . (3) And I especially want to take this opportunity to show my thanks to my dearest teacher , Mr.Li.

(4) There in one thing that is still vivid in my mind until now . (5) That was in 2001 , when the SARS was on . (6) Unfortunately , I was in hospital for a severe cold . (7) Though the doctor had proved I was just suffering from a normal cold , few students or teachers would like to come to see me . (8) However , Mr.Li came to see me every day and cared about me until I recovered .

(9) Every time I remind that experience , I feel deeply his unselfish love and devoting spirit . (10) I must return him with my practical actions . (11) I will , as he does , give others love and help when they are in tuouble . I believe that is what he expects me most .

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