三、含有平行結構的句子

平行結構指的是將結構相同或相似、意義并重、語氣一致的語言成分并行排列的一種修辭手法。這種結構層次清晰、語意順暢，能夠起到加強語氣、增強表達效果的作用。

如：
原句：This phenomenon , in my opinion , has upgraded the quality of people's life . And it has also improved the value of consumption of our modern society .
優(yōu)化：This phenomenon , in my opinion , has not only upgraded the quality of people's life but also improved the value of consumption of our modern society .
原句：Many people get up early to jog along country lanes , or in order to observe the wonder of nature . And some also just watch the sun rise .
優(yōu)化：Many people get up early to jog along country lanes , to observe the wonder of nature , or just to watch the sun rise .