高考英語書面表達(dá)日記體寫作點津

　　寫作指津：

　　【思路點撥】日記是用來記錄一天中所發(fā)生的有意義的、值得記錄的事件。在日記中,人們會對事件發(fā)表議論，闡述一下自己的態(tài)度或體會。日記中所記錄的事情可以自己的直接經(jīng)歷也可以說描述他人的事情。日記的種類有很多種，從體裁角度，可以分為記事型日記和議論型日記。記事型是以某種順序描述某一件事情發(fā)生發(fā)展的過程。而議論型日記是針對當(dāng)天的某一事件或某一現(xiàn)象表明自己的看法或態(tài)度。日記的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)可以從以下幾個角度入手：首先要對所發(fā)生的事件或現(xiàn)象進行描述。按照事件發(fā)展的先后順序進行，適當(dāng)添加對天氣或景物或心情的描述。其次要發(fā)表感想或議論，針對事件進行感悟或議論性的描述，以使文章有所立意。最后要對未來提出展望或推測，或表示決心、態(tài)度、觀點、意圖、希冀等。

　　日記體的時態(tài)：日記中所記述的事情通常發(fā)生在過去，常用一般過去時；

　　典例第一篇

　　根據(jù)下列提示，寫一則日記。提示如下：

　　1.日期：3月26日星期六

　　2.天氣：多云

　　3.下午上課時，你老是開小差，因為總是想著晚上7點要去看電影《希望之路》。在放學(xué)回家的路上，你遇到了一個迷路的孩子，把他送回了家。你雖然沒有能夠看上電影，但是心里卻很高興。

　　Saturday March 26 Cloudy

　　It’s a Saturday again. How time flies! Another week has passed.

　　This afternoon, I was often absent-minded in class because I was eager to see the new film “The Road To Hope”, which would be shown at 7:00 p.m. on the school playground. As soon as class was over, I hurried out of the classroom.

　　On the way home, I saw a little child standing by the roadside crying. Obviously, he had lost his way. Forgetting all about the film, I went up to him and asked him to tell me whatever he knew about his family. It took me nearly an hour to send him home. His parents were very glad to find their lost child back and thanked me again and again.

　　I missed the film. However, I felt very happy.

　　典例第二篇

2月4日，星期天上午，你們班同學(xué)騎車到學(xué)校附近的公園組織了一次環(huán)?；顒?。請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，寫一篇日記，發(fā)表你對此次活動的看法。

1組

掃除：清理廢紙、煙蒂、塑料袋等廢棄物

2組

宣傳：樹立標(biāo)牌，告訴游客要愛護花木

3組

演講：向游客宣傳“白色污染”的害處以及保護環(huán)境的重要性

你的看法

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注意：

1．日記必須包括表內(nèi)所有的內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫；

2．日記格式及首句已給出，不列入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右。

4．參考詞匯：煙蒂cigarette end

February 4, Sunday Fine

This morning our class organized an environmental protection activity in the nearby park. On arriving there, we were divided into three groups .The first group collected the rubbish, such as the waste paper, cigarette ends ,plastic bags and so on. The second group set up several boards to remind the visitors to take care of the flowers and trees. The last group gave a speech to the visitors on the danger of “white pollution” and the importance of protecting the environment.

I think it is very important for us to protect the environment .For the sake of people's health and happiness, measures should be taken to control and prevent pollution and everyone should make a contribution to it.

　　典例第三篇

　　五月十日(星期日)，天氣晴朗。這天上午，你去新華書店買書。你買了一些英語讀物和參考書。正要離開時，突然發(fā)現(xiàn)以個年輕的小伙子站在書柜前面，手里拿著幾本書，顯得有點不知所措的樣子，你走上前去，問他怎么回事，他告訴你他是來買書的，但忘記帶錢了。經(jīng)過打聽，知道這位青年原來是你班同學(xué)張華的哥哥，你主動借給他錢。他高高興興地買了書。下午，張華把你借給他哥哥的錢還給你，并致謝意。

　　參考答案：

　　May 10, Sunday Fine

　　This morning I went to the Xinhua Bookstore to buy some books. There were a lot of people there, and most of them were middle school students. I chose some English reading materials and a few copies of reference books. I was about to leave when I suddenly saw a young man standing in front of the bookshelves, with a few books in his hand and looking worried. I went over and asked him what was the matter. He told me that he had come to buy books, but had forgotten to bring money. And then I knew he was the elder brother of Zhang Hua, a classmate of mine. I offered to lend him some money. Having got the books he wanted, he felt very thankful to me. In the afternoon Zhang Hua returned me the money with many thanks.

　　I feel very pleased today because I have done some thing useful for others.

　　典例第四篇高考英語微信公眾號Englishtec, 高考英語資料分享QQ群號483098206.

　　假設(shè)你是小明，你的朋友杰克很喜歡旅游，發(fā)電子郵件給你詢問你的國慶旅程。你給他的回信內(nèi)容包括：

　　時間：2012年10月1日

　　人員：家人和朋友們

　　地點：新加坡國家植物園(Singapore National botanical garden)，亞洲最著名的植物園之一。

　　內(nèi)容：1. 花了三個多小時游遍了植物園，那里有各色各樣的我從未見過的植物，例如新加

　　坡的國花(national flower)—卓錦萬黛蘭(Vanda Miss Joaquim)；

　　2. 參觀當(dāng)?shù)囟Y品店，購買了許多紀(jì)念品。

　　感想：1. 每個人都過得非常開心，旅程使我們印象深刻。

　　2. 旅游可以增加我們對不同地方、不同國家的地理、風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣、文化和生活等方面的了解

　　3. 旅游可以使我們開闊視野，學(xué)到許多書本以外的知識。

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’ll tell you something about my journey during the National Da On October 1st, 2012, We went on a trip to Singapore National botanical garden, one of the most famous botanical gardens in Asia, with my family and friends. It took us more than three hours to tour the garden, which had a variety of plants that I had never seen before, such as Vanda Miss Joaquim, the national flower of Singapore. Besides, we paid a visit to the local gift shop as well, where we purchased a great number of souvenirs. Everyone had great fun during the journey and it deeply impressed us. As far as I am concerned, not only can traveling widen our knowledge of geography, customs, cultures and lifestyles of different places and countries, but it can also broaden our horizons, enabling us to learn a lot far beyond our books.

Yours,

Xiao Ming

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