Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 【試題解析】審題時(shí),務(wù)必關(guān)注“體裁、話題、內(nèi)容要求”。只要肯仔細(xì)看題,即可發(fā)現(xiàn):體裁要求為“l(fā)etter”,內(nèi)容要求為“express your thanks to your parents or any family member upon making a memorable achievement”。因此,寫作話題為感謝信,重點(diǎn)圍繞題干中“名、動(dòng)、形、副”四種詞展開(kāi)寫作即可保證作文不跑題。 【寫作提綱】 首段:寫信目的,并致謝 中間段:寫難忘的一次成功(如英語(yǔ)比賽、英語(yǔ)考試好成績(jī)) 尾段:再次致謝并祝愿 【參考范文】 Dear Parents, Today, I am writing this letter to express my thanks to you, because I made a memorable achievement in recent English Speech Competition. During my high school study, I had a variety of difficulties in English learning. For instance, I had great trouble in memorizing new words. In addition, it was also difficult for me to understand rules of English grammar. Though I could write and read, I could not express myself freely in oral English. Then, you encouraged me to participate in the English Club. Gradually, I am convinced that practice makes perfect. It was constant practice that enabled me to build up adequate knowledge, skills and competence in making speeches in English. Finally, I succeeded in this competition. Your encouragement brought me power, aroused my enthusiasm for English and helpd me to make progress every day. As your child, I deem that suppose I intend to achieve greater success in future, it is advisable for me to set a greater goal. You make me believe that if I try my utmost to do everything, the future of my life will be hopeful and promising. Thanks again, my dear parents! Yours Kid Sky 【參考譯文】 親愛(ài)的父母: 今天,我寫這封信想要表達(dá)對(duì)你們的感謝,因?yàn)樵谧罱挠⒄Z(yǔ)演講比賽中我取得了令人難忘的好成績(jī)。 在我高中學(xué)習(xí)期間,在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中我遭遇過(guò)各種困難。例如,我在背單詞方面有困難。此外,我也很難理解語(yǔ)法的規(guī)則。盡管我能讀能寫,但是我無(wú)法用英語(yǔ)口頭流利表達(dá)。然后,你們鼓勵(lì)我參加英語(yǔ)聚樂(lè)部。逐漸,我相信熟能生巧。正是不斷的練習(xí)使得我積累了足夠的英語(yǔ)演講方面的知識(shí)、技能和能力。最終,我在這次比賽中取得了成功。你們的鼓勵(lì)帶給我力量,喚起我對(duì)英語(yǔ)的熱愛(ài)并幫助我每天取得進(jìn)步。 作為你們的孩子,我認(rèn)為如果我想在未來(lái)取得更大的成功,我就應(yīng)該設(shè)定更大的目標(biāo)。 你們讓我相信如果我盡最大努力去做每件事,未來(lái)的生活將充滿希望一片光明。再次謝謝親愛(ài)的爸媽! 您們的孩子 Sky |
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