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在突破了文章寫作中“寫不出、寫不對(duì)”的問題后，緊接著要解決的就是“不會(huì)寫、寫不全”的問題。 “不會(huì)寫和寫不全”要先從教會(huì)學(xué)生審題切入。以2020年全國乙卷作文為例： 第二節(jié) 書面表達(dá)（滿分25分） 首先要領(lǐng)著學(xué)生一起就作文的命題要求進(jìn)行解讀，讓學(xué)生抓住要求中的關(guān)鍵詞，以免要點(diǎn)遺失。隨后，要求學(xué)生嘗試用漢語組織語言，寫作100個(gè)左右的漢字作文，以幫助學(xué)生梳理文章結(jié)構(gòu)。隨后，讓3-5位同學(xué)在班上分享自己的作文構(gòu)思，讓大家進(jìn)行評(píng)判并調(diào)整自己的作文思路。然后，我提供了一篇閱讀文章，讓學(xué)生閱讀并思考：文章中的相關(guān)內(nèi)容和信息是否可以借用到我們的命題作文寫作中來？ Making a Difference (冀教版七年級(jí)下冊Unit3 School Life) Hello. My name is Hao Tongxin. I live in a small village. I'm in Grade 7 and I love going to school. My school is a “hope”school. Last year, I wanted to give up my studies. I wanted to stay home and help my family. But my teacher said, “With a good education, you can make a difference. You can make a good life for yourself. Then you can help your family, friends and other people, too.” She gave me hope. My teacher is great. She often visits her students and their families. She does not want anyone to drop out of school. She always helps us in every possible way. She is making a big difference in our lives. Now, I never miss a day of school. I want to make a difference in the future, just like my teacher. 然后帶領(lǐng)學(xué)生就文本中的相關(guān)信息進(jìn)行梳理，先用英語理清思路如下： 我們身邊有很多值得尊敬的人，我中學(xué)的英語教師就是他們其中的一位。 當(dāng)我剛進(jìn)入初中的時(shí)候，我非常不適應(yīng)，想要做學(xué)回家?guī)椭议L干農(nóng)活。但是我的英語老師告訴我：只有接受了好的教育，我才能夠自己有所改變，過上好日子，才能夠幫助家人，惠及朋友和他人。我的老師全身心投入教學(xué)，她經(jīng)常深入家訪，不讓任何一個(gè)學(xué)生錯(cuò)學(xué)，總是盡其可能的的幫助我們。對(duì)于我們的人生有了重大的影響。這就是我為什么尊敬她，一位平凡但是卻充滿愛的英語老師。 最后，布置的作業(yè)就是讓同學(xué)生借助于該閱讀文本，就統(tǒng)一話題進(jìn)行寫作。 There are many respectable people around us. My head teacher，who teaches English in a hope school, is one of them. When I was admitted into Junior school, I wanted to give up my studies, stay home and help my family. But my teacher said, “With a good education, you can make a difference. You can make a good life for yourself. Then you can help your family, friends and other people, too.” She gave me hope. My teacher is great. She often visits her students and their families. She does not want anyone to drop out of school. She always helps us in every possible way. She is making a big difference in our lives. I want to make a difference in the future, just like my teacher. That is why I respect her so much.
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